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Unraveling Deceptions - Prologue
Title: Unraveling Deceptions
Chapter: 00/??
Author:![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
bite_to_all136
Genre: AU, Action Adventure, Angst, Romance
Warnings: inappropriate language, slight mentions of blood and guns
Rating: NC-17 (overall)
Pairings/Characters: Aoi & ? (Pairings to be revealed as fic goes on)
Summary: There was only one rule to follow and he had just broken it.
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters, only the mediocre story line.
Prologue
There was only one rule to follow and he had just broken it.
Fire blaring all around him, gunshots fired from every direction. The smell of iron and death strong, bodies in piles stacked from floor to ceiling. It had been a blood bath – a down right massacre, and the only choice Aoi had at the time was to run.
He knew his actions would have dire consequences. He even fathomed the thought of never returning, of going rogue. But the more his mind reeled and the longer he ran down the ravaged streets the foreign city had to offer, the more Aoi realized he had no choice. He had to go back.
Not because he was afraid of being tracked down and put to his death in the very spot he stood. Not because he was dedicated to his employers and felt as if he was obliged to return. No, he had to go back because this job – this lifestyle, it was all he knew.
A viscous gasp from his own lips brought Aoi’s sprint to a sudden pause. He slammed himself against an alley way wall, fading into the night. “F-fuck…” he pulled his hands away from the left side of his lower abdomen, able to see the crimson that stained his hands even in the dark.
Already having run for half an hour, he was losing blood fast.
An opponent had snuck up behind him back at the battle grounds of the abandoned factory, stabbing him in the stomach hard and deep, only to withdraw the blade half way and plummet it back in, Aoi feeling sure the sharp sheer of metal had pierced entirely through his body.
The pain had been intense, stilling him and making him drop down to his knees. Mouth open and gasping for breath, knowing that after all these years, this could finally be it. Hundreds of men killed at the strength of his bare hands alone and a measly pipe sharpened to its finest point would be the death of him.
At the time, the irony had actually allowed him to laugh. However, that wry fit had quickly died down because the next moment he looked up to a gun being pointed right at his forehead – able to feel the cold barrel pressed against his heated skin.
He’d tried to feel something, tried to feel scared. Tried to make himself actually feel human for the first time in his entire life. But no matter how hard he’d tried, he had failed. Because if it wasn’t taking another’s life, Aoi possessed no other talent.
The hand on the trigger had begun pressing down, Aoi having watched with a harden expression, looking his then soon to be killer in the eyes. But luck was on his side and before that trigger had the chance to be pulled, a bullet went through the other’s head; blood and brains scattering on the wall behind him.
It all happened within seconds and when Aoi had turned his head over his shoulder to see who’d just saved his life, his partner stood there with a small grin. “Told you I’d return the favor one d-“
The sound of a gun firing echoed off the four walls of the large building, his partner’s eyes widening, shining with one last glimmer of life before his body collapsed onto the floor. Aoi watched as once bight eyes faded to nothing, a pool of blood forming around the lithe body.
Aoi had, for the first time in his long career, completely frozen up. He stared at the lifeless body, unknowing how to react, just knowing he felt completely and utterly….blank. Not angry, not upset, not anything.
However the moment he had heard boots stomping on the ground and quickly approaching, he knew he had to get out. He and his partner combined had taken out over 40 men and, apparently, that had been only the first round – Aoi knowing that, even with his talent and strength, there was no way he’d be able to take on more men with his threatening injury.
So he’d stood. He’d run. And now here he was, leaning against the alleyway wall.
He placed his hands back on his injury, knowing he needed to get moving. It was never smart to keep in one place for too long in any situation.
One foot was placed in front of the other, Aoi planning on breaking into a sprint. But before he could even properly get moving, he felt his face pale and his mind go dizzy; his blood loss finally starting to catch up with him.
In spite of the sickening twist he felt building in his stomach and just how addled and light headed he felt, Aoi pushed himself to move forward. His feet carried him in a light jog to the safe house another fifteen minutes away, glad that it was nearing four in the morning and hardly any pedestrians were out on the streets to witness his tattered and bloody clothing.
Once he made his way up to the room he and his partner had put together just two days ago to use as their base, Aoi crossed his arms and lifted the hem of his shirt, tossing it to a random corner of the room and rushing into the bathroom.
He caught a glimpse of himself in the mirror, feeling his heart stall. Pale, covered in blood and bruises, and a gaping hole where flesh should be. He looked like death.
Aoi couldn’t let that distract him now. So instead he tore open the sinks cabinet, knowing this was where his now former partner always stored away the medical kit while on mission in case of emergency. Aoi knew he couldn’t clean and stitch himself up as well as an actual doctor, that the wound was deep and still life threatening even as he began to sew the needle in and out of his skin, stopping most of the bleeding. But this was the best he had for now. Seeking proper medical attention would have to wait until he returned back to Japan.
Once he cleaned himself up with a quick shower and some new clothes, Aoi took a few moments to rest on the temporary bed in the main room. He was trying to gain enough energy, knowing that at this time of the night his only form of transportation were his own two feet – meaning he would have to call up the transport part of his team and ask for the undisclosed location of their private plane in advance, needing the extra time to hike the few miles in his injured state.
Having taken enough of a breather, Aoi reached for his cell phone and brought up his contact list, clicking dial and waiting for the soft voice to pick up at the other end.
“Shiroyama, what are you do-”
Aoi was quick to cut him off, “Shinya, I need the coordinates to the plane.”
“But…what are you doing calling for them? And why so early? Isn’t that Uruha’s job?”
Flashes of Uruha, his partner, cold, bloody, and lifeless flashed before Aoi, making him close his eyes to block out the deathly images. “Uruha’s busy right now,” he said stiffly, “just give me the damn information.”
“Alrighty then...”
Exchanging information took not even a full minute, Aoi remembering the numbers in one run through. As soon as he tossed his duffle bag over his shoulder, he grabbed Uruha’s own and then made sure the room contained no remaining evidence of their stay, before heading back out into the unfamiliar night.
Even with the small break he took, Aoi still found himself weak, his wound having begun bleeding again within the first twenty minutes of his fast paced walk. He knew he was probably in safe grounds now, that there was no chance of any of the remaining hostiles catching up with him. Still, Aoi was forever in attack mode, always needing to be on his guard. Besides that, he figured the sooner he was reunited with the rest of his team, the sooner he could arrive back to what was now considered home, meaning the sooner he could face his punishment.
All together it took just over an hour for him to reach his destination. It was a cleared away strip in the woods; the path having obviously been made during the plane’s initial landing. Aoi approached the set of steps lowered on the side of the plane slowly, needing to brain storm exactly what he was going to tell the others, and when he finally made it inside, the looks he received were ones he was already suspecting.
Most of the men just looked him over once, saw he was alive, and then got back to doing whatever needed to be done. Other’s looked him over curiously, wondering just how long he would survive, some also wondering why he was alone. But it was only Shinya who actually approached him, grabbing his shoulder firmly and eyeing him with concern.
“We have a medic on board, do I need to get her to look you over?”
Aoi shook his head and dropped his bags onto the floor, his voice detached as he spoke, “No need, I’ll be fine till we get back.”
“Okay, but what about Uruha? Will he need to see her?”
Aoi’s back stiffened, “No…Uruha won’t be joining us this flight.”
He could hear the shock in Shinya’s tone, “But you know what will happen if you just leave him beh-”
“Yes, Shinya,” Aoi spat, “I’ve been doing this fucking longer than everybody on this goddamn plane, I’m well aware of all of the consequences. Now that we have that cleared up, could you just get into the captain’s seat and fly us all the hell home?”
Aoi wasn’t surprised when all he heard in return was the angered air of Shinya pushing past him to reach the cockpit of the plane.
It took them 6 hours to land back in Japan and the moment they did Aoi begrudgingly grabbed his bags and stepped off the plane.
The back of the building that’s taken over the past decade of his life loomed before him, Aoi feeling instant regret as soon as his eyes crossed over a room on the top floor of the eight story building. The room was dead center and the light never seemed to be off, Aoi knowing that the man who resided inside of there never stopped working.
His body instantly filled with regret. He should’ve just stayed in that factory – death would’ve been so much easier than the torment he knew he was going to get served.
Instead of reporting in to the eight story floor right away like he knew he should have, Aoi found himself heading for the medical wing. Deciding that he would rather properly be patched up before having to face his consequences.
The doctor was faster than what he was expecting, meaning Aoi’s quick stitch job hadn’t been too bad, and when the doctor tried to recommend he spend a couple days in the recovery room, Aoi simply tore out his IVs and headed out, needing to finally get this done and over with.
He rode the elevator up to the eighth floor, knocked on the set of double wide doors placed right in the middle of the hall. And when he heard that muttered ‘Enter’, Aoi took one last deep breath before opening both doors and making his entrance.
There behind a mahogany wood desk filled to the brim was his boss, Kyo. He was the runner of this entire organization that Aoi still didn’t completely understand even after working here for twelve years, and he was certainly the one man Aoi wished to see least in the entire world right now.
Dirty blond tresses cut short and tattoos head to toe, Kyo looked up from his laptop, spying Aoi in front of him.
“Are you here to report to me about another successful mission, Shiroyama?”
Aoi stepped further into the room, closing the doors behind him and taking a deep breath. “No, sir. I’m here to inform you that Agent Takashima is…he’s deceased, sir.”
A light, fine brow rose in suspicion, Kyo’s voice rigged and cold. “I’m to assume you brought his body back with you?”
“...No, sir…”
Aoi could physically see Kyo’s entire body stiffen. “You know what this means then?”
A ghostly whisper, “Yes, sir…I do.”
Because there was only one rule to follow – Never, no matter the circumstances, does one ever leave their partner behind.
There was only one rule to follow
And Aoi has broken it.
Chapter One
***
Author's Note: Alrighty...so, I probably shouldn't really be starting a new fic given the fact that I have two other MCs that I never update...buuuuut, I've really been wanting to do something like this for like, ever.
So yeah, I'm doing this :D
Sometimes I actually do research before writing and, since I've never really written actiony stuff before, I decided to look up some tips on how to do action right. And boooy, there's a lot to do lol. But one of the most important things is to keep things short, simple, and to the point. Don't string things along too long or readers will lose interest. So yeah, it was kind of a challenge to go from writing 10K detailed pieces to writing just...this :p But, for once...I'm kind of happy with my work :3 It sees dumbed down, and in a sense, it is...but somehow it still works? I don't know, it's 3am and I'm rambling.
Anyways, I have to next two chapters already typed up and since these are pretty short chapters, I *think* I should be able to update somewhat regularly...but I won't promise since my brain still seems to be on the fritz :3
Okaaay, I think that's it. Pairings will be revealed as the chappies are put out and, don't worry. As always, Kai is still a main character >:33
Let me know what you think and if you DO happen to like it...thank my unhealthy obsession with reading dystopian novels :'D (and I'll come up with a new summary later cause that one suuuuucks :p)
Chapter: 00/??
Author:
bite_to_all136Genre: AU, Action Adventure, Angst, Romance
Warnings: inappropriate language, slight mentions of blood and guns
Rating: NC-17 (overall)
Pairings/Characters: Aoi & ? (Pairings to be revealed as fic goes on)
Summary: There was only one rule to follow and he had just broken it.
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters, only the mediocre story line.
There was only one rule to follow and he had just broken it.
Fire blaring all around him, gunshots fired from every direction. The smell of iron and death strong, bodies in piles stacked from floor to ceiling. It had been a blood bath – a down right massacre, and the only choice Aoi had at the time was to run.
He knew his actions would have dire consequences. He even fathomed the thought of never returning, of going rogue. But the more his mind reeled and the longer he ran down the ravaged streets the foreign city had to offer, the more Aoi realized he had no choice. He had to go back.
Not because he was afraid of being tracked down and put to his death in the very spot he stood. Not because he was dedicated to his employers and felt as if he was obliged to return. No, he had to go back because this job – this lifestyle, it was all he knew.
A viscous gasp from his own lips brought Aoi’s sprint to a sudden pause. He slammed himself against an alley way wall, fading into the night. “F-fuck…” he pulled his hands away from the left side of his lower abdomen, able to see the crimson that stained his hands even in the dark.
Already having run for half an hour, he was losing blood fast.
An opponent had snuck up behind him back at the battle grounds of the abandoned factory, stabbing him in the stomach hard and deep, only to withdraw the blade half way and plummet it back in, Aoi feeling sure the sharp sheer of metal had pierced entirely through his body.
The pain had been intense, stilling him and making him drop down to his knees. Mouth open and gasping for breath, knowing that after all these years, this could finally be it. Hundreds of men killed at the strength of his bare hands alone and a measly pipe sharpened to its finest point would be the death of him.
At the time, the irony had actually allowed him to laugh. However, that wry fit had quickly died down because the next moment he looked up to a gun being pointed right at his forehead – able to feel the cold barrel pressed against his heated skin.
He’d tried to feel something, tried to feel scared. Tried to make himself actually feel human for the first time in his entire life. But no matter how hard he’d tried, he had failed. Because if it wasn’t taking another’s life, Aoi possessed no other talent.
The hand on the trigger had begun pressing down, Aoi having watched with a harden expression, looking his then soon to be killer in the eyes. But luck was on his side and before that trigger had the chance to be pulled, a bullet went through the other’s head; blood and brains scattering on the wall behind him.
It all happened within seconds and when Aoi had turned his head over his shoulder to see who’d just saved his life, his partner stood there with a small grin. “Told you I’d return the favor one d-“
The sound of a gun firing echoed off the four walls of the large building, his partner’s eyes widening, shining with one last glimmer of life before his body collapsed onto the floor. Aoi watched as once bight eyes faded to nothing, a pool of blood forming around the lithe body.
Aoi had, for the first time in his long career, completely frozen up. He stared at the lifeless body, unknowing how to react, just knowing he felt completely and utterly….blank. Not angry, not upset, not anything.
However the moment he had heard boots stomping on the ground and quickly approaching, he knew he had to get out. He and his partner combined had taken out over 40 men and, apparently, that had been only the first round – Aoi knowing that, even with his talent and strength, there was no way he’d be able to take on more men with his threatening injury.
So he’d stood. He’d run. And now here he was, leaning against the alleyway wall.
He placed his hands back on his injury, knowing he needed to get moving. It was never smart to keep in one place for too long in any situation.
One foot was placed in front of the other, Aoi planning on breaking into a sprint. But before he could even properly get moving, he felt his face pale and his mind go dizzy; his blood loss finally starting to catch up with him.
In spite of the sickening twist he felt building in his stomach and just how addled and light headed he felt, Aoi pushed himself to move forward. His feet carried him in a light jog to the safe house another fifteen minutes away, glad that it was nearing four in the morning and hardly any pedestrians were out on the streets to witness his tattered and bloody clothing.
Once he made his way up to the room he and his partner had put together just two days ago to use as their base, Aoi crossed his arms and lifted the hem of his shirt, tossing it to a random corner of the room and rushing into the bathroom.
He caught a glimpse of himself in the mirror, feeling his heart stall. Pale, covered in blood and bruises, and a gaping hole where flesh should be. He looked like death.
Aoi couldn’t let that distract him now. So instead he tore open the sinks cabinet, knowing this was where his now former partner always stored away the medical kit while on mission in case of emergency. Aoi knew he couldn’t clean and stitch himself up as well as an actual doctor, that the wound was deep and still life threatening even as he began to sew the needle in and out of his skin, stopping most of the bleeding. But this was the best he had for now. Seeking proper medical attention would have to wait until he returned back to Japan.
Once he cleaned himself up with a quick shower and some new clothes, Aoi took a few moments to rest on the temporary bed in the main room. He was trying to gain enough energy, knowing that at this time of the night his only form of transportation were his own two feet – meaning he would have to call up the transport part of his team and ask for the undisclosed location of their private plane in advance, needing the extra time to hike the few miles in his injured state.
Having taken enough of a breather, Aoi reached for his cell phone and brought up his contact list, clicking dial and waiting for the soft voice to pick up at the other end.
“Shiroyama, what are you do-”
Aoi was quick to cut him off, “Shinya, I need the coordinates to the plane.”
“But…what are you doing calling for them? And why so early? Isn’t that Uruha’s job?”
Flashes of Uruha, his partner, cold, bloody, and lifeless flashed before Aoi, making him close his eyes to block out the deathly images. “Uruha’s busy right now,” he said stiffly, “just give me the damn information.”
“Alrighty then...”
Exchanging information took not even a full minute, Aoi remembering the numbers in one run through. As soon as he tossed his duffle bag over his shoulder, he grabbed Uruha’s own and then made sure the room contained no remaining evidence of their stay, before heading back out into the unfamiliar night.
Even with the small break he took, Aoi still found himself weak, his wound having begun bleeding again within the first twenty minutes of his fast paced walk. He knew he was probably in safe grounds now, that there was no chance of any of the remaining hostiles catching up with him. Still, Aoi was forever in attack mode, always needing to be on his guard. Besides that, he figured the sooner he was reunited with the rest of his team, the sooner he could arrive back to what was now considered home, meaning the sooner he could face his punishment.
All together it took just over an hour for him to reach his destination. It was a cleared away strip in the woods; the path having obviously been made during the plane’s initial landing. Aoi approached the set of steps lowered on the side of the plane slowly, needing to brain storm exactly what he was going to tell the others, and when he finally made it inside, the looks he received were ones he was already suspecting.
Most of the men just looked him over once, saw he was alive, and then got back to doing whatever needed to be done. Other’s looked him over curiously, wondering just how long he would survive, some also wondering why he was alone. But it was only Shinya who actually approached him, grabbing his shoulder firmly and eyeing him with concern.
“We have a medic on board, do I need to get her to look you over?”
Aoi shook his head and dropped his bags onto the floor, his voice detached as he spoke, “No need, I’ll be fine till we get back.”
“Okay, but what about Uruha? Will he need to see her?”
Aoi’s back stiffened, “No…Uruha won’t be joining us this flight.”
He could hear the shock in Shinya’s tone, “But you know what will happen if you just leave him beh-”
“Yes, Shinya,” Aoi spat, “I’ve been doing this fucking longer than everybody on this goddamn plane, I’m well aware of all of the consequences. Now that we have that cleared up, could you just get into the captain’s seat and fly us all the hell home?”
Aoi wasn’t surprised when all he heard in return was the angered air of Shinya pushing past him to reach the cockpit of the plane.
It took them 6 hours to land back in Japan and the moment they did Aoi begrudgingly grabbed his bags and stepped off the plane.
The back of the building that’s taken over the past decade of his life loomed before him, Aoi feeling instant regret as soon as his eyes crossed over a room on the top floor of the eight story building. The room was dead center and the light never seemed to be off, Aoi knowing that the man who resided inside of there never stopped working.
His body instantly filled with regret. He should’ve just stayed in that factory – death would’ve been so much easier than the torment he knew he was going to get served.
Instead of reporting in to the eight story floor right away like he knew he should have, Aoi found himself heading for the medical wing. Deciding that he would rather properly be patched up before having to face his consequences.
The doctor was faster than what he was expecting, meaning Aoi’s quick stitch job hadn’t been too bad, and when the doctor tried to recommend he spend a couple days in the recovery room, Aoi simply tore out his IVs and headed out, needing to finally get this done and over with.
He rode the elevator up to the eighth floor, knocked on the set of double wide doors placed right in the middle of the hall. And when he heard that muttered ‘Enter’, Aoi took one last deep breath before opening both doors and making his entrance.
There behind a mahogany wood desk filled to the brim was his boss, Kyo. He was the runner of this entire organization that Aoi still didn’t completely understand even after working here for twelve years, and he was certainly the one man Aoi wished to see least in the entire world right now.
Dirty blond tresses cut short and tattoos head to toe, Kyo looked up from his laptop, spying Aoi in front of him.
“Are you here to report to me about another successful mission, Shiroyama?”
Aoi stepped further into the room, closing the doors behind him and taking a deep breath. “No, sir. I’m here to inform you that Agent Takashima is…he’s deceased, sir.”
A light, fine brow rose in suspicion, Kyo’s voice rigged and cold. “I’m to assume you brought his body back with you?”
“...No, sir…”
Aoi could physically see Kyo’s entire body stiffen. “You know what this means then?”
A ghostly whisper, “Yes, sir…I do.”
Because there was only one rule to follow – Never, no matter the circumstances, does one ever leave their partner behind.
There was only one rule to follow
And Aoi has broken it.
Chapter One
Author's Note: Alrighty...so, I probably shouldn't really be starting a new fic given the fact that I have two other MCs that I never update...buuuuut, I've really been wanting to do something like this for like, ever.
So yeah, I'm doing this :D
Sometimes I actually do research before writing and, since I've never really written actiony stuff before, I decided to look up some tips on how to do action right. And boooy, there's a lot to do lol. But one of the most important things is to keep things short, simple, and to the point. Don't string things along too long or readers will lose interest. So yeah, it was kind of a challenge to go from writing 10K detailed pieces to writing just...this :p But, for once...I'm kind of happy with my work :3 It sees dumbed down, and in a sense, it is...but somehow it still works? I don't know, it's 3am and I'm rambling.
Anyways, I have to next two chapters already typed up and since these are pretty short chapters, I *think* I should be able to update somewhat regularly...but I won't promise since my brain still seems to be on the fritz :3
Okaaay, I think that's it. Pairings will be revealed as the chappies are put out and, don't worry. As always, Kai is still a main character >:33
Let me know what you think and if you DO happen to like it...thank my unhealthy obsession with reading dystopian novels :'D (and I'll come up with a new summary later cause that one suuuuucks :p)
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So, so good, the suspense is insaaaaane.
AND THAT ENDING Q_Q So creepy and full of foreboding. Seriously, this has me on the edge of my seat because I have literally NO idea what's going to happen next, I just know it seems like shit is about to go down *_* Seriously. This is a perfect prologue, I cannot WAIT to read the next chapter!
I also can't wait to be introduced to the other characters and learn more about what the hell is going on (I'm guessing Aoi is an assassin?) aaaand what the dystopian elements will be, of course.
I noticed you've chosen to keep the pairings a secret for now (which I love btw) soooo I'm not going to ask anything that would spoil it for everyone else, just.... this is the fic with the donkey pairing, riiiigh????? :P I'M SO EXCITED ABOUT THIS!
IMO the chapter had a good length, and I definitely won't complain about shorter chapters if it means more updates :P No pressure though~!
This is only the prologue and it's already so goood!
I already know I'm going to freaking love this, ~I can feel it~
YOU ARE AMAZING THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR AMAZING-NESS WITH US <333
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You wanna know what's going to happen next, ehh? :'DDD Well, I'll tell you this much...the next chappie is Kai's introduction, so yeah, there's that to look forward to :33
I have to keep my mouth shut about everything for now bc I don't want to spoil much but I guess you could say Aoi's an assassin...of sorts :'D (I know I'm teasing and I love it :33) And my dystopian elements may be a lot more subtle than say if you were to read an actual dystopian novel, buuut...if I don't ake the more than obvious enough, I'll be sure to point them out :33
LOL YEEEEES, donkey pairing all the way >:3333 Though, that won't the ONLY pairing...the donkies def hook up with other people as well ;)
You're making me want to post the next chapter already buuuut...I need to give others a few days to read this (and hopefully write a bit more :'DD) SO YEAH, STOP BEING SO EXCITED :P
Nooo, you're the amazing one. I thought that was obvious by now? :D
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You're such a tease! >:D I'm definitely looking forward to Kai's introduction!
AND THE DONKEY PAIRING <3 Damn, slutty donkeys then... You just made me even more excited about this fic >:D I can't wait to find out what pairings you have planned! I'll be pretty shocked if Kaoi isn't included :P
DO ITTTT! <3 Haha nah okay, I get what you mean sooo I'll be patient :3 THE EXCITEMENT CAN'T BE STOPPED THOUGH!
Psssh stop itttt. I can't write so nah :'D You're the amazingly talented one!
(I've noticed I seem to be the only one who smiled a little at the fact that you decided to kill off Uruha in the first chapter. Can't please everyone I guess >:D)
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Pshh, Kaoi? What is this Kaoi of which you speak? You would EVER ship those two together? Just....ew ;)
But the donkey pairing should show up relatively early so...keep your fingers crossed for me that they go over well with everybody else :p
I finished up another chapter tonight, so yaaay! My brain is being good rn >:3333
(Hey, his demise was necessary, okay? lol. But for real, I've decided that, for once, I'm going to go with what MY brain decides is easiest, not what the readers want...that might make me sound a bit cruel, but honestly I'm doing it FOR them so I can actually write :'D)
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Yeah, I know... The thing is, there's this writer on LJ... she's slowly making everyone ship them, it's so peculiar... Ew indeed ;)
WHO CARES ABOUT EVERYONE ELSE?? Certainly not *I*. When the donkeys finally make their appearance, I promise to squeal so loudly you won't even be able to hear any possible protests.
Girl you are on a rollll! :D *pats brain*
(Nah I think that's wonderful, and the best possible way to ensure that you don't end up with a pesky writer's block :D Baibai Uru~)
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But you already killed Uruha ;___; such sadness. I'll be okay though haha.
I love dystopia everything. I'm so happy, I hope your brain will work good for you. Haha that sounded weird. Again I was sneaking away from family to read your fic and type out a quick comment.
Can't wait for more. I think I said that three times. And I'm happy you like it too because you're writing is amazing. No matter what genre or style. XD
<3
(Another edit, because I suck) HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!
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I'm sorry, but a life had to be sacrificed for the fic to have an actual story line and, unfortunately, Uruha is the one I have the hardest time writing...so I was easier just to kill him :'D
Dystopas are seriously the best ;____; Except the popular novels tend to...not be so good :p
I think I'm going to try and post weekly, soo...next chapter shall be out soon! :D And thank you so much for always being so kind to my lil writings, it makes me heart all warm and stuff :p
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU AS WELL! <33
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First off, it's totally fine that there are no/non-exsitant Dir en grey pairings, I was just happy they had a role lol, don't be sorry!
I totally understand killing Uruha...lol, I have done so myself many times (in my unseen fics that I feel are to vulgar for the fans...who might kill me, or maybe I'm just crazy)
I have so much reading I need to catch up on, I haven't read any books in awhile. When I do, it's usually man on man action xD I did a read a real good one where it was the end of the world with just men traveling together, I mean come on...what else would happen? xD
I hope you can, I am hooked and greedy! haha. Of course <3333 You are one of my role models!
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Naaah, man. I definitely get not wanting to post something bc the fans would be all WTF DID YOU JUST DO??? Like, I actually work really well with character death, but any time I've written it, it was just something I kept to myself bc, come on, most people don't want to see their fave band men dead :P So, you're not crazy, just reasonable :3
OMG ME TOO >:333 I can't bring yself to read about straight characters anymore. Which is sad bc there ARE a lot of great novels out there with heterosexual romances but...nope, just doesn't work for me. Both the main characters need to have a D, okay? :3 Goodreads is a great place to find lots of man on man activity >:3 (btw what you mentioned sounds really interesting and if you have the title/author, would you mind sending it my way?)
OKAY IT'S LIKE FIVE IN THE MORNING AND YOU MADE ME TEAR UP. ROLE MODEL??? ;_____; STOP. BEING. SO. NICE. DAMMIT. :'DD
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AND YES, If there isn't any D involved I don't want to read it lol. I love Goodreads, its my go to for all my M/M reads XD I think it was this one:
https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/9307906-esperanza
I don't know, I have horrible memory, either way that is a good one lol. I even made a East Asian Historical list for my sake on there lol: https://www.goodreads.com/list/show/76958.Gay_Fiction_East_Asian_Historical
I am an avid reader on the whole M/M action even more so on Asian, that's why I'm trying to write my own original fiction about it. I'm going to shut up, I've had some wine so I'm a bit rambling and not making sense probably.
I'M NOT ONLY BEING NICE, I SPEAK THE TRUTH!! <3
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And thaaaank you so much for the new reading material! I haven't found anything two read in almost two years now...so I've just been re-reading the same series lol. If you use Goodreads, you've probably seen the In the Company of Shadows series? Soooo good :33
Ohh, this looks like a list I'm definitely going to have to check out! Thank you again <33
Good luck on writing your story! (and you're making plenty of sense, btw :3)
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I actually don't think I've read that one. I'll have to check it out thanks!
Thank you <3
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I get the feeling that you like to try and push yourself to write these big, long, ultra mega super detailed pieces and that's why you sometimes have trouble writing. But I'm here to inform you that this length was perfect. It was nice and to the point, concise. But not TOO short, you know? It is possible to write shorter chapter and have them still be really good. As long as the writing itself is good, which yours is, then the length doesn't really matter ^^
Ok~ next point. I love that you haven't actually revealed who the paring is yet. That just makes me anticipate it more I wanna know who it issss. I'm kind of expecting Kaoi just coz they're your baes but I could really see it being anyone. I know you aren't super picky about pairings so it could really be anyone >.< I'm thinking...maybe Ruki. Aoiki. Possibly, if it isn't actually Kaoi. But we'll see x3
I love this actiony kind of stuff. It's so damn cool and really, with the way you've started it off there are SO many different directions it can go in. Like, I seriously have no idea where it's gonna go from here. Obviously Aoi's landed himself so far up shit creek he doesn't know what to do with himself but, obviously, being the main character he's not gonna die. Unless you decide to go all Game of Thrones on this one Dx So yeah, you've left everyone with a lot of suspense and I'm SUPER excited to find out what happens next ^^
Ok, so my last point is probably one of my most important ones. And it is... WHY THE FUCK DID YOU KILL URUHA WITHIN THE FUCKING PROLOGUE???? LIKE, HE DIDN'T EVEN MAKE IT INTO THE FIRST CHAPTER! DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH THIS KILLS ME!?!??! MY BAE IS DEAD Dx Ok, rant over. Killing my little ducky is probably my only criticism, otherwise you're doing an amazing job.
I cannot wait to read more. You know I love you, you know I love your writing and I'm totally hooked on this fic already. <3 <3
P.S. I got 2 new ratty bbys yesterday and I think you'll be particularly fond of their names. *drumroll* They are Kai and Aoi~ Yaaaaay. Now I have Kaoi rats x3
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I do do that, I know it :'D But I feel with slice of life fics, which are a majority of what I write, lots of details are needed and to make the chapters complete, all that extra ramble is necessary :3 I'm glad you're happy with the length of these chapters and I hope the next one doesn't disappoint because it's *definitively* shorter and less actiony (I was trying to drag all of you in with the dam prologue and I hope it worked :33)
Oh boy. Honestly, I haven't revealed the pairings yet bc...I'm not certain of ALL of them. There's going to be soooo many and...I just didn't want to spoil stuff with the ones I already have planned to use :3 Kaoi's a big possibility, so is Aoki :'D Pretty much any and every pairing is going to be possible and there's really not going to be a main pairing cause everyone is fucking around with everyone (well, that's what I have planned, at least. I won't know until my brain actually types shit out :3)
I' sorry I killed Uruha but it had to happen for the story to go on :'D It'll all make sense eventually, I swear! :D
Aww, thank you, girl <33 I love you, tooooo <33
ANNND P.S. That is adorable as hell I EXPECT PICTURES SOON! I need to see what Kai and Aoi look like in rat form :'D
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Aoi as a mafia person...or something of that kind...but-but URUHA! Mah baby was killed off way too soon :(...oh wait, this is just the prologue though hehe.
ACTION PACKED EXCITEMENT!!! WEEEEEEEEE! Can't wait! *feels excited* :D
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Sorrry for what happened to Uruha, but somebody had to go :'D
Thanks for commenting!
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SO GREAT!
Thaaank u!!