Date: 2015-10-29 02:10 pm (UTC)
Hi!

I read these two chapters in a row and wow, gotta say that this was fucking fantastic! I usually don't read stories with this pairing but now I had to. The name of this story was very simple but at the same time, very intriguing. I wanted to give this a chance so here we are. And I really loved this, so hot and interesting!

I liked the atmosphere in this story, it made me feel different kind of feelings over and over again at the same time. Those fanfics I've read over time, usually Kai is so gentle and innocent in them so this kind of man was very nice difference. He was possessive, sexy and tried to make Ruki feel himself hot all over his body. Nice one, Kai, you really can be seductive in fanfics! Kai as an incubus is so hot mental image I can't even *__* I'm also happy that he was mysterious and didn't give answers to Ruki immediately.

Somehow I feel so sorry for Ruki because he was obsessed about this man and wanted to fuck things up even though he had a loving boyfriend staying beside him. This stuff happens in real life too but I can't help myself when I'm feeling so empty inside. Ruki, you need to get your shit together :( I'm honestly very amused that Reita didn't seem to know about Ruki's doings. Or maybe he knew but didn't want to say anything because, no matter what, they loved each other very much. I'd like to read sequel to this, ending was such a cliffhanger and made me want to know and read more!

Aoi was kinda funny XD Such a good friend when he is covering up Ruki's messes. But did I understand right, Aoi was also cheating on his boyfriend Mizuki? Oh, well that's a nice job both of you, Ruki and Aoi. What a duo, indeed :D But luckily there was even someone who was doing something for Ruki and the other way around :)

You hate writing smut? Well, if you hate it, I gotta say that this sex scene was so unbelievably hot *__* You have written this so well, I guess I need to give this pairing even more chances to amaze me, hahah XD All in all, this was very interesting and good story. I hope you would continue writing this someday! Thank you for sharing this here, I love this <3
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