I stumbled upon this story via the Nocturnal Bloodlust tag on jrokyaoi, and even though I didn't get a story in which the guys are the main focus, I still got something pretty interesting. It was kind of sad to see Uruha go after so little time in the story, though. Also, I'm quite interested in knowing how Aoi and Kai will manage to work together without killing each other. Aaaand, I won't lie, I'm also interested in seeing Hiro more. Because, well. Hiro. Yeah. Hiro. *dirty smirk* Get him naked and you'll make my day. Or even half naked. As long as he gets to... give a few thrusts... *smirks some more* (THE WORLD NEEDS MORE HIRO. And yes, so do I...)
I quite like Ruki's character in there, he seems smart and fragile in a way, trying to protect Kai, getting immersed in his work. And I'm sure Reita was a nice guy, too... If he wakes up. My, my, Kai seems like he's gonna be popular! Reita, Tora, and.. probably Aoi at some point... *stares longingly at Uruha, oh you pretty, pretty man* I was never a fan of Kai in any pairing whatsoever, but I'll try my best because it would be stupid to let a promising story go to waste just for a pairing I'm too fond of. And as I'm starting to have a dozen of strange pairings planned... let's just say I wouldn't want people to just look at the pairing and walk by, either, haha.
So far, the story is interesting. I think you did quite well with those action chapters towards the beginning, short and to the point. It was pretty intriguing and worked quite nicely to make me want to keep on reading. I've noticed the update rhythm was a tad bit unpredictable, so I'm just gonna hope you'll be inspired and will be on a roll so that I can read more. After all, I got to read all seven chapters in one go, so now I hope I'll be able to keep on reading at a nice pace. But hey, no pressure! *laughs*
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Date: 2015-06-11 08:40 am (UTC)I quite like Ruki's character in there, he seems smart and fragile in a way, trying to protect Kai, getting immersed in his work. And I'm sure Reita was a nice guy, too... If he wakes up. My, my, Kai seems like he's gonna be popular! Reita, Tora, and.. probably Aoi at some point... *stares longingly at Uruha, oh you pretty, pretty man* I was never a fan of Kai in any pairing whatsoever, but I'll try my best because it would be stupid to let a promising story go to waste just for a pairing I'm too fond of. And as I'm starting to have a dozen of strange pairings planned... let's just say I wouldn't want people to just look at the pairing and walk by, either, haha.
So far, the story is interesting. I think you did quite well with those action chapters towards the beginning, short and to the point. It was pretty intriguing and worked quite nicely to make me want to keep on reading. I've noticed the update rhythm was a tad bit unpredictable, so I'm just gonna hope you'll be inspired and will be on a roll so that I can read more. After all, I got to read all seven chapters in one go, so now I hope I'll be able to keep on reading at a nice pace. But hey, no pressure! *laughs*
Sorry for the ramblings XD