http://kyoselflove.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kyoselflove.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bitetoall136 2015-04-30 10:33 pm (UTC)

OMG I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU!!! <33333333

Even though this chapter ripped my heart out of my chest and stomped on it a few times ;____; That's fine, I love it when it hurts ;D

At the beginning, I was all like, Aoi, what the hell? You dick! And then, yeah okay, he's supposed to do that. xD Poor Kai though...Is Aoi really that good? Or is Kai just so emotionally drained he can't focus on anything.

And Tora's anger...hmm let me think. DOES HE LOVE KAI?! Of course he does, who the hell wouldn't? Oh that's right, Aoi. <---- I feel like I have said this before?! Lol. I can't hate Aoi though, I have to say he is a little bit of a badass, even if he is cocky.

Then that scene where Kai thinks he sees Reita, omg, heart breaking more. Thank you.

THEN you have to make him go and see Reita, and see how he is just there and literally probably never ever ever coming back. ;____; Poor Kai, seriously. I really like the part where you had him wanting to pound on Reita's chest and scream, wake the fuck up! It gave me a nice mental image and made me want to cry.

That ending, someone better make Kai smile again! Kai not smiling....unacceptable.

I am all down for a slow build, I fucking love this fic, and I can't wait for it. AND I'M SO HAPPY!!!! When I saw you updated, I squealed. For reals. I hope you keep getting bursts of inspiration because the world needs more of your fics and awesome writing!

So thank you!!!!!! <3333333333333

p.s. had to use Kai smiling icon to render my heartache. xP

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