I'm usually not one to comment on everything I ever read, but this amazing piece of prose recommends a feedback...(btw, I'm sorry if my autocorrect is fucking up my normally readable English...my keyboard won't turn to the English one, so I'm forced to use the German one *sucks*)
First of all: I'm crying...and I don't seem to be able to stop soon...this fanfiction was heavy, emotionally and theme-wise, it consists of one of my most favorite pairing, though I usually find Yutaka to be the top in those (can't help it - Kai's a right dominant bastard *chuckles* and I love him all the more for being such a natural leader-type <3) ;), and it was absolutely great!
Second: Please don't change the end to a happy one...sometimes, it is not needed! This time definitely not! This story is perfect in itself as it is, so don't change anything, please...
Third: I'm still crying... I can relate to the feelings described in those three chapters...both to Yuus as well as to Yutakas...it made me feel even more connected...
This fic was recommended on Facebook so excuse me for adding you - I'm always looking for good english fiction, as most of the German ones are not only flat, but also "without soul", if you know what I mean...there are a few exeptions, but not many...
That said - please continue to write, I adore your style! And write as many happy endings as you can think of (we all love our fair share of smiley-happy-go-lucky-lovers), but - again - please don't change anything with this piece of art!!
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Date: 2014-07-19 07:04 pm (UTC)I'm usually not one to comment on everything I ever read, but this amazing piece of prose recommends a feedback...(btw, I'm sorry if my autocorrect is fucking up my normally readable English...my keyboard won't turn to the English one, so I'm forced to use the German one *sucks*)
First of all: I'm crying...and I don't seem to be able to stop soon...this fanfiction was heavy, emotionally and theme-wise, it consists of one of my most favorite pairing, though I usually find Yutaka to be the top in those (can't help it - Kai's a right dominant bastard *chuckles* and I love him all the more for being such a natural leader-type <3) ;), and it was absolutely great!
Second: Please don't change the end to a happy one...sometimes, it is not needed! This time definitely not! This story is perfect in itself as it is, so don't change anything, please...
Third: I'm still crying... I can relate to the feelings described in those three chapters...both to Yuus as well as to Yutakas...it made me feel even more connected...
This fic was recommended on Facebook so excuse me for adding you - I'm always looking for good english fiction, as most of the German ones are not only flat, but also "without soul", if you know what I mean...there are a few exeptions, but not many...
That said - please continue to write, I adore your style! And write as many happy endings as you can think of (we all love our fair share of smiley-happy-go-lucky-lovers), but - again - please don't change anything with this piece of art!!