FUCK. YOU. SAM >:( I cried, I hope you're happy young lady! I'm not joking, I really was crying by the end.
But seriously, you had absolutely NOTHING to be worried about with posting this. It was so emotional and perfect. I'm pretty sure its an example of a perfect angst story. Also, I'm proud that you threw your worries out the window and just posted it anyway :P
I actually really liked the amount of inner monologue there was in this fic. There were moments throughout it, like fond memories that were so hearwarming and had me smiling like an idiot. Like Taka drawing a dick on the whiteboard and prom night. Trust Taka to pull one of his naughty little pixie tricks and spike the punch bowl >:( And then there were other moments that were so bittersweet, particularly the memories Yuu had of Yutaka. That fact that he loved Yutaka so much but had been through so much pain because of him made it really emotional to read. And then of course there was the painful stuff. I'm really curious as to why Yutaka just up and left. And then there's the fact that Yutaka put the tape in the box because Yuu was the one thing he never wanted to forget; that bit of so heart shattering, I could barely deal.
Everything in this was described so beautifully. I could really feel every emotion Yuu was reminiscing on and in some way I guess I can relate. Only a smidge though. As in the way that when you ;love someone those feelings never really go away. My boyfriend had to leave at the beginning of the year and we split up because I didn't know if I could handle a long distance relationship. But we just recently got back into contact and we met up and it just felt like we fell back into old habits. It was like we haven't been apart for six months. Obviously that only compares a little to what Yuu went through, but the point is I can empathize with him which makes this fic so much more touching for me.
You said that you weren't sure if people would get the message behind this fic. I think I may have partially figured it out (I probably haven't) but I'm not sure if I should say >.<
Anyway, I really hope this comment was sufficient enough to make you believe that this really was a fantastic piece of writing full of so much emotion and atmosphere. It was perfect. You should feel proud that you made me cry ;P I hope the reaction to this little gem helps you regain some of the confidence you've been lacking. You know I love you and you're writing and it pains me to hear that you don't have confidence in something that you're so talented in. I love you, sweet girl and I'll tell you all of this as many times as I need to in order to made you believe it <3 <3
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Date: 2014-07-18 12:17 pm (UTC)But seriously, you had absolutely NOTHING to be worried about with posting this. It was so emotional and perfect. I'm pretty sure its an example of a perfect angst story. Also, I'm proud that you threw your worries out the window and just posted it anyway :P
I actually really liked the amount of inner monologue there was in this fic. There were moments throughout it, like fond memories that were so hearwarming and had me smiling like an idiot. Like Taka drawing a dick on the whiteboard and prom night. Trust Taka to pull one of his naughty little pixie tricks and spike the punch bowl >:( And then there were other moments that were so bittersweet, particularly the memories Yuu had of Yutaka. That fact that he loved Yutaka so much but had been through so much pain because of him made it really emotional to read. And then of course there was the painful stuff. I'm really curious as to why Yutaka just up and left. And then there's the fact that Yutaka put the tape in the box because Yuu was the one thing he never wanted to forget; that bit of so heart shattering, I could barely deal.
Everything in this was described so beautifully. I could really feel every emotion Yuu was reminiscing on and in some way I guess I can relate. Only a smidge though. As in the way that when you ;love someone those feelings never really go away. My boyfriend had to leave at the beginning of the year and we split up because I didn't know if I could handle a long distance relationship. But we just recently got back into contact and we met up and it just felt like we fell back into old habits. It was like we haven't been apart for six months. Obviously that only compares a little to what Yuu went through, but the point is I can empathize with him which makes this fic so much more touching for me.
You said that you weren't sure if people would get the message behind this fic. I think I may have partially figured it out (I probably haven't) but I'm not sure if I should say >.<
Anyway, I really hope this comment was sufficient enough to make you believe that this really was a fantastic piece of writing full of so much emotion and atmosphere. It was perfect. You should feel proud that you made me cry ;P I hope the reaction to this little gem helps you regain some of the confidence you've been lacking. You know I love you and you're writing and it pains me to hear that you don't have confidence in something that you're so talented in. I love you, sweet girl and I'll tell you all of this as many times as I need to in order to made you believe it <3 <3