;________________________; I LOVE THIS SO MUCH OH MY GOD
“Kai didn’t know it, but he was breaking Takanori from the inside out. Taka had known he’d wanted the dentist for a long while, but these small touches proved to be much more than want…it was a practical need.”
^LOVE this! For a moment I was feeling SO BAD for Takanori, his emotions we’re so palpable and I was starting to feel really desperate on his behalf. It was like I could feel how much it must have hurt to have Kai treating him the way he wanted, but still not really accepting his advances… I really love how Taka more or less created a “point of no return” by practically throwing himself at Kai and forcing him to acknowledge what Taka wanted, and made it impossible for him to deny that they had crossed the line of being friends. Well at least that’s how I interpreted it xD I really liked that because it showed how desperate he was to make Kai return his feelings.
Now about that handjob…. Congratulations, you’re the first writer to actually make me care about something like that xD Sorry but usually, handjobs in fics are kinda ‘meh’ to me, ~dicks belong in orifices~, etc. But this was SO GOOD! Good, as in really hot and emotionally charged, and I actually really, really liked it xD
THE SMUT! Asdfghjkl do I even have to tell you why I liked it?! You already know; Kai noticing that something was wrong, making sure that he was okay *melts* It wasn’t rusty, it was brilliant ;____;
And holy shit the Picasso reference. I’m still laughing, that was fucking amazing.
And then, the drama~ Ngl I was thinking more or less the exact same thing as Taka – if Kai could get out of the wedding, or rather if he WANTED to get out of the wedding – then why hadn’t he? Why did he avoid doing anything until the last minute? It was so freaking heartbreaking how Kai, his truth, had become tainted because their entire relationship was like that, there was nothing honest about the way they had to hide it from everyone to keep up appearances… When he gave him the ultimatum, and Kai told him to go to Tokyo, my heart broke into a million tiny little pieces, just so you know. But the ending more than made up for it :3 I really thought we wouldn’t be getting a happy ending! But we diiiiid, and it was perfect <3 To me, the most perfect thing was that Kai never married her, but stayed ~true~ to Taka even when they weren’t together BECAUSE HE WAS WAITING FOR HIM <3 *dies*
Are you quite certain it’s finished? Really? Really-really? Because, you know… You could continue it :3
This was such a lovely read, thank you for sharing it with us <3 It's really late and I'm really tired so this probably isn't the most coherent comment in the world, but in case you can't tell.... I love this! xD
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Date: 2014-02-08 01:59 am (UTC)“Kai didn’t know it, but he was breaking Takanori from the inside out. Taka had known he’d wanted the dentist for a long while, but these small touches proved to be much more than want…it was a practical need.”
^LOVE this! For a moment I was feeling SO BAD for Takanori, his emotions we’re so palpable and I was starting to feel really desperate on his behalf. It was like I could feel how much it must have hurt to have Kai treating him the way he wanted, but still not really accepting his advances… I really love how Taka more or less created a “point of no return” by practically throwing himself at Kai and forcing him to acknowledge what Taka wanted, and made it impossible for him to deny that they had crossed the line of being friends. Well at least that’s how I interpreted it xD I really liked that because it showed how desperate he was to make Kai return his feelings.
Now about that handjob…. Congratulations, you’re the first writer to actually make me care about something like that xD Sorry but usually, handjobs in fics are kinda ‘meh’ to me, ~dicks belong in orifices~, etc. But this was SO GOOD! Good, as in really hot and emotionally charged, and I actually really, really liked it xD
THE SMUT! Asdfghjkl do I even have to tell you why I liked it?! You already know; Kai noticing that something was wrong, making sure that he was okay *melts* It wasn’t rusty, it was brilliant ;____;
And holy shit the Picasso reference. I’m still laughing, that was fucking amazing.
And then, the drama~ Ngl I was thinking more or less the exact same thing as Taka – if Kai could get out of the wedding, or rather if he WANTED to get out of the wedding – then why hadn’t he? Why did he avoid doing anything until the last minute? It was so freaking heartbreaking how Kai, his truth, had become tainted because their entire relationship was like that, there was nothing honest about the way they had to hide it from everyone to keep up appearances… When he gave him the ultimatum, and Kai told him to go to Tokyo, my heart broke into a million tiny little pieces, just so you know. But the ending more than made up for it :3 I really thought we wouldn’t be getting a happy ending! But we diiiiid, and it was perfect <3 To me, the most perfect thing was that Kai never married her, but stayed ~true~ to Taka even when they weren’t together BECAUSE HE WAS WAITING FOR HIM <3 *dies*
Are you quite certain it’s finished? Really? Really-really? Because, you know… You could continue it :3
This was such a lovely read, thank you for sharing it with us <3 It's really late and I'm really tired so this probably isn't the most coherent comment in the world, but in case you can't tell.... I love this! xD
*whispers* but are you sure it’s finished~?