Hello, darling. It's been a little while since I commented on something. So sorry about that. But I'm here now anyway :)
I really liked this chapter. I think, it's always necessary to have at least one chapter that goes a little slower than others because it really helps to give characters depth and it builds people's understanding of those characters. Plus, it provides an opportunity, as a writer, to really delve into the character and go nuts with your creativity ^_^ I know, for me at least, that writing characters and developing them and giving them their own backgrounds and personalities is one of funnest parts about writing :3
I really loved this chapter because it gave us an insight into all the characters and their backgrounds. It was really interesting to read about Kouyou and Takamasa, those two intrigue me and, for some reason, I really really like Kou as a halfling. I think it fits him well. It's always good not to focus solely on the "main pairing/characters" when you have such a complex plot, like yours. But, in saying that, you did still mix Yutaka and Akira in. Whether it's directly or indirectly, which is awesome. And we found out a little bit more about who Kai and Reita are and what's going on there... But only a little ;P
I really like the relationship between Yutaka and Akira (plus, I just ship them so hard, you have no idea xD). That bitterness but also the caring factor is great. They just get under each other's skin so much but then there are those fleeting moments when they can't control themselves and they give in to their desires ;) Its really great. I love it. I especially liked it in the last chapter. Yutaka knows how to make poor Akira so incredibly sexually frustrated xD
So, overall, a fantastic chapter as always. I'm so in love with this story. I feel like vampires and werewolves are used a lot and there are a lot of ways one can go wrong when using them. A lot of ways to be totally cliche and unoriginal. And SO many people just get vampires totally wrong (I would know, I'm a HUGE vampire nerd), so I'm always kind of cautious about reading vampire fics. But with this one you've managed to be totally original and create something that is just so fascinating and unique and you've developed it so, so well. Plus, your vampires are great too (none of that Twilight bullshit). So, kudos to you. Well done, darling. Thank you for restoring my faith in vampire/werewolf fics. I can't wait to read more <3 <3
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Date: 2014-01-09 01:29 am (UTC)I really liked this chapter. I think, it's always necessary to have at least one chapter that goes a little slower than others because it really helps to give characters depth and it builds people's understanding of those characters. Plus, it provides an opportunity, as a writer, to really delve into the character and go nuts with your creativity ^_^ I know, for me at least, that writing characters and developing them and giving them their own backgrounds and personalities is one of funnest parts about writing :3
I really loved this chapter because it gave us an insight into all the characters and their backgrounds. It was really interesting to read about Kouyou and Takamasa, those two intrigue me and, for some reason, I really really like Kou as a halfling. I think it fits him well. It's always good not to focus solely on the "main pairing/characters" when you have such a complex plot, like yours. But, in saying that, you did still mix Yutaka and Akira in. Whether it's directly or indirectly, which is awesome. And we found out a little bit more about who Kai and Reita are and what's going on there... But only a little ;P
I really like the relationship between Yutaka and Akira (plus, I just ship them so hard, you have no idea xD). That bitterness but also the caring factor is great. They just get under each other's skin so much but then there are those fleeting moments when they can't control themselves and they give in to their desires ;) Its really great. I love it. I especially liked it in the last chapter. Yutaka knows how to make poor Akira so incredibly sexually frustrated xD
So, overall, a fantastic chapter as always. I'm so in love with this story. I feel like vampires and werewolves are used a lot and there are a lot of ways one can go wrong when using them. A lot of ways to be totally cliche and unoriginal. And SO many people just get vampires totally wrong (I would know, I'm a HUGE vampire nerd), so I'm always kind of cautious about reading vampire fics. But with this one you've managed to be totally original and create something that is just so fascinating and unique and you've developed it so, so well. Plus, your vampires are great too (none of that Twilight bullshit). So, kudos to you. Well done, darling. Thank you for restoring my faith in vampire/werewolf fics. I can't wait to read more <3 <3